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Post by kblover on Jan 25, 2006 21:34:44 GMT
I thought I would share my new poem with you, hope you don't mind. It's just that I was on the bus today and I thought to myself am I as miserable as some of the people who catch the bus in a morning and then thought I wonder what their 1st impression would be of me. I hope its the last part of the poem that they see.
I see you every morning the same expression on your face I really hope you smile, sometimes if not that's such a waste. You always seem so lost as though you don't like where you are and if that is the case move on before it goes too far.
I see you every morning you're always on your own but I am really hoping that you're not all alone. You always seem distracted and really close to tears as if you're not quite with us but stuck in all your fears.
I see you every morning yet today you look all strange your actually wearing your smile which makes a pleasant change. You really do seem happy and I'd just like to say that I hope this lasts forever and not for just one day.
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Post by angel2 on Jan 25, 2006 21:50:31 GMT
Awww kb hun thats really good hunnie, thankyou xxx
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Post by strauss on Jan 26, 2006 0:17:36 GMT
Another brilliant poem kb hun, well done.xxxx
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Post by Melz on Jan 26, 2006 9:15:56 GMT
![:'(](http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y243/jsf316/smilies/icon_cry.gif) Brilliant poem kb ![](http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y243/jsf316/smilies/clappingsmiley1vl.gif) welldone you are really great at these ![:'(](http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y243/jsf316/smilies/icon_cry.gif)
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Post by rainbow1984 on Jan 26, 2006 9:53:12 GMT
Well done KB, you brought tears to my eyes.
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Post by Bex *Crop Circles In The Sun* on Jan 26, 2006 22:05:26 GMT
aww brill hun xx
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